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Thursday, February 03, 2005

What We Don't Need to Know about Your Body

The different styles of writing certainly make a difference in depicting the personalities in "Portrait of My Body" and "What They Don't Tell You about Hurricanes." The tone used in each is perhaps what sets the mood, intrigues the reader, and makes them worth-while reads. To compare, both Lopate and Gerard use tones that vent their frustration over things-that-be of which they have no control; Lopate's body is his, yet he can do little to change it while Gerard can do nothing to prevent the hurricane or the devastation that is certain to follow. Gerard and Lopate write to some degree to voice their protests, but more so to complain. They write out their frustrations.
The styles in which Lopate and Gerard write are very different however. Lopate writes about himself entirely. He describes his physical image and at the same time gives the reader a thorough description of his thoughts as well. Gerard's writings describes the oncoming hurricane and is not as straight-forward about himself. One can sense his dread about the hurricane, but he does not stress his concerns in the same way as Lopate.
Lopate's "Portrait if My Body" was entertaining at first, but ended in a way that seemed tiresome and whiney. Gerard's description seemed depressed and sad, understandable regarding his situation.

4 Comments:

  • At February 3, 2005 10:54 AM, Blogger Martha Spencer said…

    I loved you title. That was funny. He did give a lot of information about his body that might have been better off kept to himself. I thought the tone did differ in both stories because of the content as well. Good job!

     
  • At February 3, 2005 11:01 AM, Blogger bluesfiend said…

    I like your comparison of them venting about the things in which they had very little control over. And like Martha, I think your title was classic. Although I don't think Gerard was depressed and sad, I thought he focused more on how the hurricane was a bonding experience. Just a thought though.

     
  • At February 3, 2005 11:40 AM, Blogger F. Mitchell said…

    I'm glad Bluesfiend mentioned that about being depressed. I agree with him. What do others think? Or perhaps Wild & Wonderful means something else by "depressed"? What I'm most curious about how how Lopate would have had the same effect and met the same goals if he had said a lot less. What do you think? If we "cleaned up" his essay to avoid hearing about things we don't usually hear about from me, what would be the effect of it?

     
  • At February 3, 2005 6:21 PM, Blogger She-ra said…

    Perhaps I should have clarified this in my post, by "depressed" I was referring to the situations the hurricane presented in itself. The images of waiting first for the hurricane itself, then the initial devastation, and finally the aftermath of insects and heat to follow are all rather depressing when piled one on top of the other. As I mentioned in a comment on someone else's post, I believe that Gerard used this tone as a way to separate himself from the hurricane; the descriptions provide some sort of relief to the occurring events.
    In response to Lopate's writing, my initial reaction was a delighted one. At first, I really enjoyed his description. It was humorous because, first it was entertaining to read his descriptions and then secondly, because it was a HE!!! a MALE vainly, intimately, picking apart his body!!!! I would have preferred a simple mention of how he worries about his source of masculinity, and a very few supporting details. That would have been perfect. All that needed mention was the comparison to a cat; I would have been delighted with this single, witty illustration.

     

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